http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/ (as an examplar of using HKEdCity's blog for language teaching) Thu, 08 Jan 2009 12:35:58 +0000 http://lyceum.ibiblio.org/?v=1.0.2 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-679 Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:09:20 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-679 The story content is a bit modern. In fairy kingdom, it is better to eat "flower" better than ˇ°spaghetti". The story content is a bit modern. In fairy kingdom, it is better to eat “flower” better than ˇ°spaghetti”.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-677 Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:06:42 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-677 Full of imagination. I think the story will be more interesting if u try to write some more conversation between u and the fairies u met. Full of imagination. I think the story will be more interesting if u try to write some more conversation between u and the fairies u met.

]]> http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-657 Tue, 11 Dec 2007 08:14:10 +0000 http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/12/07/a-day-with-fairies/#comment-657 Even though it is a short description, you have used a lot of adjectives and the imagery you portrayed is vivid. Even though it is a short description, you have used a lot of adjectives and the imagery you portrayed is vivid.

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