A day with fairies
2007-12-07 11:53 by hke-004A01
In one windy afternoon, I fell asleep when I was writing my Dairy. Suddenly, someone touched my shoulder and woke me up. Oh! I saw a fairy standing beside me. “Audrey, come with me.” She said in a graceful voice. She held my hands and we flew out of the window.
She brought me to a castl. The castle was a fairy castle and looked like the Disney castle. There were many fairies. Some were fat, some were slim, some were young and some were old. They welcomed me with a beautiful song.The fairy brought me to the Lily Garden. There were colourful lilies, dancing butterflies, singing birds and a fantastic glittering fountain. We enjoyed my favourite food “spaghetti” in the Garden.Then, the fairy brought me to the Wishing Well and granted me a wish. I told her I would like to see my parents. She said, “Jump into the Wishing Well and all your dreams will pop out. Goodbye!” I woke up and I saw a fairy sticker in my dairy. |
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2007-12-11 16:14
Even though it is a short description, you have used a lot of adjectives and the imagery you portrayed is vivid.
2007-12-12 10:06
Full of imagination. I think the story will be more interesting if u try to write some more conversation between u and the fairies u met.
2007-12-12 10:09
The story content is a bit modern. In fairy kingdom, it is better to eat “flower” better than “spaghetti”.