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	<title>Comments on: Descriptive Writing</title>
	<link>http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/11/20/descriptive-writing/</link>
	<description>(as an examplar of using HKEdCity's blog for language teaching)</description>
	<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jan 2009 13:50:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>by: hke-004A05</title>
		<link>http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/11/20/descriptive-writing/#comment-1884</link>
		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Apr 2008 14:58:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>The man is very happy because he has lost half of his hair. He is also shocked because he did not expect the hairdresser to be unprofessional.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The man is very happy because he has lost half of his hair. He is also shocked because he did not expect the hairdresser to be unprofessional.
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		<title>by: mummy idol</title>
		<link>http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/11/20/descriptive-writing/#comment-686</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:30:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>haha, what a funny picture! Next time i dare not go to hairdresser's with 50% off.....Will try to turn it into a short story later....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>haha, what a funny picture! Next time i dare not go to hairdresser&#8217;s with 50% off&#8230;..Will try to turn it into a short story later&#8230;.
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		<title>by: hke-004A14</title>
		<link>http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/11/20/descriptive-writing/#comment-683</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:14:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>The man with brown trousers should be the customers of the salon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The man with brown trousers should be the customers of the salon.
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		<title>by: hke-004A09</title>
		<link>http://edblog.hkedcity.net/english/2007/11/20/descriptive-writing/#comment-659</link>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Dec 2007 08:19:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>The lady in apron is laughing happily. She is the hairdresser.
The man sitting on the chair is sad.

The hairdresser cut the man's hair. However, she only cut half of his hair. That is why the man is in shock.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The lady in apron is laughing happily. She is the hairdresser.<br />
The man sitting on the chair is sad.</p>
<p>The hairdresser cut the man&#8217;s hair. However, she only cut half of his hair. That is why the man is in shock.
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